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Nothing to Live For
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:58:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Nothing to Live For
The only solution
Rests with suicide
Even if I don't want to die
I have to get away
From what I feel inside
I have to get away
From this life
I have to pay the price
Give up everything
What could have been
Never know anything else
But the pain inflicted
I'm standing beside myself
With no where else to go
And nothing to live for
The smile I have lies
To get you off my back
To make you stop questioning
How I could go so far
As to even think this
You wouldn't understand
You haven't been through this
You can only imagine
Like I've been
Copyright ©
Essentially9
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2004-08-31 21:58:33]
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Re: Nothing to Live For
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by waos on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:38:46 PM AEST
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The best was the last stanza.. totally true and good.
Awesome job once again.
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Re: Nothing to Live For
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by emphaticplacebo on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:54:36 PM AEST
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| Great Write! Very true and emotional. I too liked that last stanza, it really wrapped tthe poem up well. Good Work! |
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Re: Nothing to Live For
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:21:55 PM AEST
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Well written
Hope you're okay |
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Re: Nothing to Live For
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:27:54 PM AEST
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Your last line is true no-one knows whats going on inside your head but you.
You created pain so vivid, and sadness so real, but the overall poem, is a harsh reality to what some of us do feel is the only means to an end.
Beautifully written.
Take care always
Kindragon |
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Re: Nothing to Live For
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by Heartfilledblood on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 12:01:43 AM AEST
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I remember when i thought about sucide. Just push through Essentially9 and work through your tough time in life. If you need someone to talk to you can talk to me if you feel you need to our just wanna halla.
Very sad write.
Heartfilledblood |
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Re: Nothing to Live For
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 05:48:52 AM AEST
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you must have read my mind when you wrote this poem, as I have been feleing exactly like this....a very pained and emotional write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Nothing to Live For
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 05:33:44 PM AEST
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You must have seen Alien Vs. Predator.
Keep up the fight.--Mothy |
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