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Underneath The Broken Skin With Shards Of Glass Keeping You Alive
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:18:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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afraid
the darkness of the world
inside my mind
forgets to remind me of all the evil
that i have caused
within
held tightly together
like stitches holding skin
but not medical
mental
Copyright ©
abnormalpunk
... [
2004-08-31 21:18:50]
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Re: Underneath The Broken Skin With Shards Of Glass Keeping You Alive
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by chadbrown on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:04:22 PM AEST
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| The title is eerie, reminds me of meth, and the brutal side effects. |
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Re: Underneath The Broken Skin With Shards Of Glass Keeping You Alive
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by chadbrown on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:05:32 PM AEST
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| The title is eerie, reminds me of using meth, and the brutal side effects. |
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Re: Underneath The Broken Skin With Shards Of Glass Keeping You Alive
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:31:50 PM AEST
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Goodbye is easy, pain is easier, the end is eternal, torment is forever.
Me I prefer what little life has to offer.
It was alright balad, short quik and emotional.
Keep the poems coming, let thou talent free.
Kindragon |
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Re: Underneath The Broken Skin With Shards Of Glass Keeping You Alive
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by Flipped_out on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:10:29 AM AEST
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My Prince of Deepness
vous êtes mon favori faites-l'amour moi
magnifique
Kell x |
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Re: Underneath The Broken Skin With Shards Of Glass Keeping You Alive
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 04:19:50 AM AEST
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| awesome, I LOVE IT! |
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