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Annoyances
Contributed by
mcloysoccer
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Clicks of pens, ringing of bells
Sounds of school, Annoyances
Mostly sounds but sometimes smells
All of these things irritate me
They make my blood boil
Some even make me sneeze
All of these annoyances hurt my head
A headache is coming
I wish I were back in bed
I can feel my blood pressure rising
My temple throbs out of my head
Everything’s annoying
I wish I wasn’t here
If I could go back to bed
I’d cut off my own ear
The essence of this dreadful place
Creeps up my spine
It suffocates my very brain
Like a tree surrounded by a vine
If only I could stop these things
Stop everything around
If only I could make my feet
Lift slowly off the ground
I would fly away from here
Leaving everything behind
All of my annoyances
Would slowly leave my mind
After I finally graduate
I might regret this poem
But now I only want to get
So far away from home
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mcloysoccer
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Re: Annoyances
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:23:43 PM AEST
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I can identify with this..but from a Teacher's point of view!! lol
I enjoyed this, thank you...
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Re: Annoyances
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:33:08 PM AEST
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Nothing wrong with this poem. It's great. Although it conjured up memories of my very own (not so recent), school days.....thanks ever so much. :P
Good writing!!!
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Re: Annoyances
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:31:35 PM AEST
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| well let me see the top things that annoy me about school 1) the pointlessness of the things to learn 2) the people there 3) the school rules that i cannot make those annoying people shut up! =] i liked your write also, it brings back all these bad memories that i will live through again tomorrow. |
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