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Screaming Within
Contributed by
mcloysoccer
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:08:05 PM in AEST
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Deafening Sounds
Deafeningly Silent
No one speaks
All is quiet
Loud inside
Solemn appearances
Screaming within
No one will take the chances
Everyone scared of emotions
Shaking violently again
No one cares of others
They only scream within
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Re: Screaming Within
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:49:36 PM AEST
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"Deafeningly Silent" Hmmmm says the Teacher.....
P/S rythm----> rhythm....lmao...you'll be sorry I read your work....hehehe...
Another cool write.
Jenni
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Re: Screaming Within
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:56:34 PM AEST
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Well done!! Quite deep, my friend.
I'm still thinking on it. Tres bon!
~Breezy |
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Re: Screaming Within
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:38:38 PM AEST
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| amazing write. i love this one. keep up the fantastic work. your write is very true in many aspects, which is the sad part about this. |
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Re: Screaming Within
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 04:25:19 AM AEST
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| AWESOME |
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Re: Screaming Within
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by Solnubis on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 04:33:36 PM AEST
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| I never want to say anything negative on someones work, because I know that they wrote it because of their passion of writing. However I found something messing from this one. It really didn't catch my attention as other poems I have read. I'm not comparing no but there's something missing in yours. However the rhyming was very good. |
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Re: Screaming Within
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by FireStarter on
Saturday, 2nd January 2016 @ 03:16:53 PM AEST
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| I absolutely love this poem :) |
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