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do you care
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 08:58:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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my fears
come up
from deep with in
But I cant
let you see
this part of me
you ask whats wrong
"whats wrong?"
but do you truely care
You say you do
But your never there
any sign of trouble
*poof* your gone
you come back
after its done
sayin you love me
and always will
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vampyrekiss
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2004-08-31 20:58:35]
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Re: do you care
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by mckayla on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:56:26 PM AEST
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I like the structure of your poem! Great write!
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Re: do you care
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:38:49 PM AEST
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very emotional,vivid portrail of friends that arent really true friends,so much hurt and pain wrapped within each wrod.
Masterfully written.
take care always
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Re: do you care
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by clowns_can_burn on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 11:04:14 AM AEST
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i really thought this is a good poem, and it really is like that these days. saddly
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