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NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 07:20:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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"Being or Nothing"
"NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!"
Timebot said,
No "hand outs" from life.....
when desperate you would be.
Best loves come along when
you're not looking, real sneaky!
Best friendships also come,
when you're not desperate and forget.
Not those you try desperately to get!
Life doesn't give many "hand-outs."
'Tis best not to expect any "knock-outs!"
Never disappointed for expecting.....
Pleasantly surprised if found reaping!
To anticipate, to look ahead.
Even presume a situation you'll be misled!
Presumptuousness many times leads to dread
Remain unknowing, prepared instead!
Don't expect comments on your poetry
Create only for the love of the write.
Only one may read it, comment truly.
Unexpected blessing, marvelous highlight!!!
Diminish the value of your treasure?
Few comments make it appear without pleasure?
Not at all!
Your heart's work is not valued by numbers!
Depth of feelings, splendid word weavers!
Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
August 29, 2004
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"All history is a record of the power of minorities, and of minorities of one."
~Ralph Waldo Emerson~
"I'm thinking of one that very few comment on,
or even read his writes?
Jesus Christ
~and~
He said, 'Only a few will find
the road that leads to life!"
His Worth: Son of God!
Just because you're the minority
doesn't make your beautiful
creations worthless or bad!!!
*Unpresuming Smiles!*
(Thanks a lot Timebot!)
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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Re: NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 07:34:30 PM AEST (User
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words well written
Shari |
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Re: NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 08:20:47 PM AEST (User
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Oh ConSue, so often I think you are just here to remind us all of whats really important in life.
Thank you for that.
And I love the term "word weavers"!!!!!! |
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Re: NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 08:40:55 PM AEST (User
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Wonderfully written. And a great message to all. :~)
~Breezy |
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Re: NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:57:30 AM AEST (User
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Hmm..its good message..wonderful write.
I read few of Timebot poems and commented also... venkat |
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Re: NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 05:53:41 AM AEST (User
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great write :):) thanks to you and Timebot's idea,
pixie xx |
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Re: NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 04:47:13 PM AEST (User
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Well said Connie !!!
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 09:09:17 PM AEST (User
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i want a dose of your joy my friend......oh wait a minute, what am i saying......you just did.......you always give us joy and hope with your words.....we love love you connie sue!!!! |
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Re: NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:32:33 AM AEST (User
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Nice poem. Timebot annoys the hell out of me. |
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Re: NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by critterhideaway on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:28:42 AM AEST (User
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Oh! How very true and well spoken. Thank you for reminding me about the One who never had a thank you or recieved His real worth on this earth. |
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Re: NO HAND-OUTS FROM LIFE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:38:39 AM AEST (User
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Good work mom.
luv, huggs, smiles,
yo brat
emy |
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