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Summer of Uncertainty
Contributed by
girltranscended
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:22:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am weak
for love stories
and opportunity.
Tears and sweat mixing
a summer of uncertainty.
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girltranscended
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2004-08-31 17:22:39]
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Re: Summer of Uncertainty
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:27:31 PM AEST
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| this is the first time ive read your poetry so bear with my opinions. =] looking at just this one piece it looks like you have the talent to either write lyrics or amazing haiku poetry. this has flow and if this was longer(which i wished that it was) it looks like you would be able to rhyme this excellently. i know that basing talent etc on one write is wrong, but i felt i needed to just say this on this piece of yours. good write, keep it up. |
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Re: Summer of Uncertainty
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 08:33:14 PM AEST
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| I agree to some point with the above, however even in your short verse you have the ability to say a lot. I think the lines you've written tell more than commenting on a movie. :) |
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