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Temper Flares
Contributed by
sid_the_tampon_fairy
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:14:52 PM in AEST
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Temper flares
Memories not yet faded
The cry of the silencer
Pierces screaming air
Temper flares
Dangles down, just tight
Soft brown, harsh black
World from a higher view
Temper flares
Sharp edges red and moist
Drip drop, down stream
Cut, slice, rip
Temper flares
Brain dead, holes and tunnels
Powder capsules white
Stoney stares; cloudy fog
Temper flares
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Re: Temper Flares
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by Sirena_Degana on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:00:34 PM AEST
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YO BOB!!! wazzzap....i didn't know you were on this site..wicked woman!!! this poem is awesome you actually dont' use naughty four letter words..hehe....it's scary...but then it's you so i understand it in it's depth...
OY WID DA POODLES!!
blessed be
sirena
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Re: Temper Flares
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:43:33 PM AEST
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| very interesting write. i dont think i can figure out what this is about. its probably something so simply that ill kick myself over it later. ::sigh:: |
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Re: Temper Flares
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 07:06:21 PM AEST
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yay! I love this! It's awesome, although you're the LAST person I could ever think of with that kind of temper! lol Great write!
Katie |
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Re: Temper Flares
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:15:39 PM AEST
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It's a cool poem. Alot of cool poems don't make much sense, but... you consider the "temper flares" motif in the context of these wicked phrases and you get a cool poem about the emotional inequities of flaring tempers...
or words to that affect.
--Mothy |
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