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I Have To Slit For DEATH...!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:40:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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It’s easy to fake I’m happy,
But it just doesn’t help my head.
What’s going on?
Why do I feel so dead?
Pointless feelings,
Have collected inside.
There’s loads of swelling,
No where to hide.
Pain is scattered,
For all to see.
But why not sit back,
And join the queue to mock me!
I put a smile on my face,
But I’m breaking underneath.
What would it take you?
To wake up and see?
I’ve lived like this for too long,
I’m so torn up now.
What would it take from you?
TO NOT GIVE ME FROWNS?
Silence doesn’t come to me,
Noise shouts and screams.
Then angry faces follow me,
Haunting within my dreams.
What do you want from me?
What do you expect?
I have to cope with illusions,
… And I just want to be dead.
I’m so scared of dieing, but I don't much want to live,
If only some one could help me out!
But it’s all “you’re confused, deprest and morbid”.
Why can’t you help me out?
Why would it give you strain.
Wake up! And see me.
I’m so lost in so much pain.
Wake up and know me!
And realize your help sucks.
Work out why I won’t talk to you,
It’s ****ing easy enough!
Close your eyes and envision.
A dead, friend, in your cell.
Then put 2 and 2 together,
And you’ll be at my gateway to hell…!
… And there is where you’ll find me.
Falling back with the wind.
You don’t understand me,
It’s not my choice to give in…
There’s no control here,
And that’s why I now must end…!
Nothing here to save me,
And so I have to slit for death...
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deathdrop
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2004-08-31 15:40:57]
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Re: I Have To Slit For DEATH...!
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:52:49 PM AEST
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| you're not the only person who hurts themself to block out the world. don't think that you're alone...but i chose to stop when my four year old cousin saw my scars and asked if i hurt. there's more to life that we somehow refuse to see....i hope you can find your light soon. |
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Re: I Have To Slit For DEATH...!
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:19:53 PM AEST
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the best help is that which you can't see or hear....someone who is just willing to listen and never says a word can heal more wounds then you know......if you ever need to talk i'm here..pm me...and in case your wondering.....i do understand......i do it to....it's better to have a pain you can controle.....makes you feel less out of controle of your whole life.....
or maybe it's different for you..but..i'm here so let me know if you want to... |
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Re: I Have To Slit For DEATH...!
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by Sweetheart on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:49:56 PM AEST
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| If i could say anything to help you with your pain i would, but no human can help you. I know many people do not have faith in God. Many just say it is all made up. So you probably don't want to hear this, i just know that he is the only one who can heal you internally. I know that he is healing me physically and spiritually everyday. I know this because of a rare cronic illness i have. So I hope that you will believe me and find that God is the answer, but it is your choice and i can't tell you what to think. I hope things get better. God bless! |
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Re: I Have To Slit For DEATH...!
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:25:33 PM AEST
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DeathDrop,
Hay, I've commented on your poetry before and I guess I never got through to you. I used t be in your position and sometimes still am.... and your poetry is good...... yet, I'm tired of seeing your poetry posted when all you do is just pity yourself. If no one is "saving" you then get the **** up and save your dame self. If you want things to work out then do it yourself. I used to be just like you..... but I realized that it was me who had the problems and not anyone else. People aern't always gonna be there for you and that is just the ways of this world. If you really want this feelings to stop then YOU do something about it. Don't blame anyone but yourself for letting these feelings control over you. Get up and Get help and Get the **** out of your misery. No one can choose for you..... LIFE IS WHAT YOU MAKE IT!!!!!!!!
ALINA |
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Re: I Have To Slit For DEATH...!
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by emphaticplacebo on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:17:28 PM AEST
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| The poem is good, speaking your mind and linking it up with good rhyme, but it sounds like you have an axe to grind with the world.. and thats cool.. poetry expresses that, but the concept you dont seem to get is that you are not Marco Polo. You arent the first person to experience pain. Look around you, everyones here to lend you support, dont throw that away! Use that support to help yourself, because ultimately you are the only person that can begin your healing process. |
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