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Thoughts That Never Change
Contributed by
purplestary
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:05:28 PM in AEST
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As I lay here trying to sleep,
I go through my mind which is so steep.
Life is in no way breezy,
and whoever said life would be easy?
Life is full of mysterious things,
and not everyone will leave with wings.
These are a few things that sit in my mind,
so i'm writing them down to unwind.
These are my thoughts that never change their story,
so these are the thoughts that give me no reason to worry.
Life is full of change and the changed,
and there is no way it can be arranged.
These are the only thoughts that stay in my mind,
so i'm writing them down to unwind.
Ann Marie True
Copyright ©2004 Ann Marie True
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purplestary
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2004-08-31 15:05:28]
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Re: Thoughts That Never Change
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:09:12 PM AEST
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Good job here..Simple and very in depth to..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: Thoughts That Never Change
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by nabokovfan87 on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:24:54 PM AEST
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| nice write great thoughts for a poem. whenever u get time try to revisit this one and spruce it up again. if u get in the same mindset add some too. dont be afraid to write more then a few stanzas some of the best poems turn into thousand page stories. anyways keep up the good work...... |
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