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sleep
Contributed by
purplestary
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 02:58:37 PM in AEST
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as you silently sleep
i stare and wonder why
why it's me who's still awake
and only gets to weep
why i must eternaly
open my eyes
and never have a dream
morning brings meloncholy
what i wouldn't give
to be like you at night
i don't care about the sun
i only wish to sleep and live
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Re: sleep
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:50:14 PM AEST
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Another very good poem..Your good at this to..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: sleep
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:31:05 PM AEST
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I like your poem purplestary
thanx for submitting it
cheers! |
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Re: sleep
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by nabokovfan87 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 02:52:42 PM AEST
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| good thought just work on the rhyme scheme a little |
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