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Distant Cries
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 02:40:03 PM in AEST
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Can you hear the distant cries?
That echo into the night skies,
I can I hear them in my sleep,
I hear the souls as they silently weep.
They haunt my sleep every night,
Take a hold on my sanity so tight,
Make me feel like I am falling,
Into an abyss I can still hear the calling.
I try to stop it, I cover my ears,
But they have found me through my fears,
The screams become louder & close,
Feel like I have been touched by a ghost.
In the total pitch black,
I can hear the sound as they rap,
Upon the windows of my mind,
Didn’t take them long for me to find.
I try to run but they do follow,
After me into the sleepy hollow,
Fear causes me to quicken my pace,
These types of demons I don’t want to face.
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Re: Distant Cries
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 02:49:05 PM AEST
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| great write pixie! as usual. you show such talent in your writes.;) |
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Re: Distant Cries
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 02:56:00 PM AEST
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Hear them indeed, I do. Though I believe the songs and whispers to each of us that do "hear" is different. Otherwise our expressions would be the same and our understanding of each other would be increased. I know not for whom I feel more sorrow, those that do not hear, or those that do and still deny.
A wonderful write pixie
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Distant Cries
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:01:05 PM AEST
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| wow such a magnificent poem, very erie and haunting, well done! |
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Re: Distant Cries
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:23:12 PM AEST
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| this is one of my favorites of yours already! Cool stuff, Pixie-pants. --Mothy |
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Re: Distant Cries
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:48:35 PM AEST
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I like this one alot..It was very well written work..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: Distant Cries
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 04:35:47 PM AEST
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wow i love the way you write youre amazing
i too have demons that haunt me in the night |
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