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Once Upon A Time...

Contributed by lucyspoetry on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 02:00:07 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Once Upon A Time...

Once Upon A Time,
A long long time ago;
Two who were obviously ment to be
Simple couldn't be.

All around them, everyone asked,
Why aren't You both together?
They all thought the two would
Somehow, make One.

Not too long afterwards,
The two just couldn't resist.
They fell in love,
Like no one thought such love exists.

Now with time, the two would finally be,
Nothing but happily together.
Even knowing how distant they were,
The two would still laugh and smile so!

A tear fell down my face,
When it was, that I noticed
The time has come for them
To leave eachother.

Hopefully an angel will show up, one day,
And remind them of their love together.
If ever it could have been, in just any way,
They wouldn't be here aching no longer.

The two are now avoiding eachother,
Without knowing it,
They'll probably be killing their love
If no one says a single word real soon!

With all this said,
I'll quit annoying You.
All these thoughts inside my head,
I wish I may, and yes I do...

Miss You so deeply,
If only You'd stop avoiding me.
If only I can stop hiding behind each door,
And tell You all before I hit the floor!

If I can someday soon
Reach up to the sky,
I'd blow a kiss, and hug the moon,
Then let go with just a cry...

This story takes its end
With their last hope, their only friend.
The two have ached for one another,
Now the two will, someday, stop longing for the past,
The two, who all thought perfect as a blast,
They will, one of these days, move on to another.

Their only hope,
Their only dream;
To hold onto the rope,
Don't ever let go; we are a team!

Together they can move on
Together they can live on
Together they can breathe
Together they will be...

~The *Unforgiven* End~

Written by *~*Lucy*~*

Copyright © lucyspoetry ... [ 2004-08-31 14:00:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Once Upon A Time... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 02:04:23 PM AEST
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awwww beautiful and very sad, *hugs*

pixie xx

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