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Betrayal
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:54:53 PM in AEST
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I walked in and saw you naked
and I saw her in your bed
the bed we slept in together
but you chose to use her instead
She was just a child
but you were just a boy
and I was just a fool
to think I was more to you than a toy
I stood by your side
thinking you were man enough for me
but you told me lie after lie
and now I finally see
You didn't deserve my love
I kept giving everything I had
You didn't deserve my trust
this is the last time you'll make me sad
I made my mistakes
but I always meant it when I said "I love you"
I never thought you to be fake
or that you'd break my heart in two
You made me hate myself
you made me feel worthless
just so you could experience
one night for your own selfishness
You made me feel hideous
you made me want to kill
I hate the person you've created
a spawn from your own evil will
I hope you don't destroy another
in the way you've killed the good in me
I hope one day I won't feel smothered
and from pain and lies I'll be free
I'm letting go of your hand
I'll no longer wipe away your tears
I'm going to force myself to stand
up against all of my fears
I'm sorry you couldn't be happy
I'm sorry you couldn't return true love
I'm letting go of all the times you hurt me
because enough is enough
So now I'm on my own again
and maybe one day I can forgive you
but nothing in the world can erase from my mind
that moment of truth in which I saw the real you
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AnastasiaN
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2004-08-31 12:54:53]
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Re: Betrayal
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:56:43 PM AEST
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the pain for you is still very raw, I am sorry for that *hugs* betrayal is the hardest thing to deal with, but you have written about it which is a good thing, getting our feleings all out on papaer or into a poem is a good release...
i hope that in time the pain will ease for you,
a very touching and emotional write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Betrayal
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 01:36:54 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful and sad poem. i am sorry for the lose, and i hope one day you can be the person you were. peace and love,
Dane |
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Re: Betrayal
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:21:23 PM AEST
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I am so proud of you for standing back up and not letting this keep you down. There is no person on this earth worth losing yourself over. Stay true to yourself always and give your heart only when proved deserving. Good luck to you.
Rita |
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Re: Betrayal
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by Nessa_Lee on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 08:51:28 PM AEST
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| Wow! This was so awesome! Very well written...I have a boyfriend and we've been together for two years...and man I could only imagine how bad it hurts for this to happen. Great job though! |
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Re: Betrayal
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by Sirena_Degana on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:44:09 PM AEST
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i know how you feel..the same thing practically happened to me just in a different way.....my heart goes out to you..hopefully you get better.
just think of it like this. maybe it happened for a reason and now someone BETTER can be in your life..someone that won't do something like that to you
blessed be
sirena |
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