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Temper, Temper
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 07:16:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Its not fair, what you do
Its not nice how you change,
Black n blue, feeling unloved
and why you act so strange,
You love me best, you tell me so
do i come back, or should i go?
Bordering on an obsession,
im not a material thing,
i dont belong to you, i chose you
is it all or nothing?
i absolutely adore you
but you gotta change that way,
you flip, you hurt and scare me
but still i want to stay,
from angel to devil in just a few seconds
what am i to do,
draw up the goods, overlook the bads
and still stay with you....
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
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2004-08-31 07:16:25]
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Re: Temper, Temper
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by brew on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:52:31 AM AEST
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| Seemingly deep.........Good write |
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Re: Temper, Temper
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:33:16 PM AEST
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| oh wow i'm struggling with this very question...it's a good poem that speaks directly to me. |
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Re: Temper, Temper
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by Alina on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 12:37:44 PM AEST
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I agree with the above comment.... this poem really speaks to me. " ...from angel to devil in just a few seconds...." those lines remind me of myself and my struggle with drugs....also of my mother and our relationship. Awesome write!! Keep it up.
ALINA |
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Re: Temper, Temper
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by soulsearching43 on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 05:06:34 AM AEST
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| excellent poem |
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