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Dream world
Contributed by
SocialMisfit
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 01:49:26 AM in AEST
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I open my window;
let the cool air caress my skin.
I see a world without anger;
a world without sin.
Where cruelty is unknown,
and people are wise.
Where all hurt is forgotten,
and no one ever cries.
Where every minute is a blessing,
sent from God up above.
Where every child has a mother,
and the most important thing is love.
Where everyone is equal,
from any country, of any race.
Where people take things easy,
and walk at a steady pace.
Where a smile becomes a sanctuary,
to the person in which it is received.
Where every person is understood,
and everything is rightfully conceived.
I dream of this world each and every night,
and forever think of this world in the day.
Yet, it seems so very distant,
and so incredibly far away.
In this world we can only hope for one thing;
God will have mercy and send help from above.
We are all innocent and want to be saved.
Please give us my world, my world of love.
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Re: Dream world
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 02:10:20 AM AEST
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Very beautifull, it is.
Good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Dream world
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:17:18 AM AEST
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this was a very good poem. unfortunately i fear your dream will not be realized. only when the dead in christ shall rise. keep up the good work though. peace and love,
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Re: Dream world
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by tabby on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:27:34 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful and touching, wonderful message in the poem, good job! |
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Re: Dream world
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by MomentInTime on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:12:32 AM AEST
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Everyone should have a window such as yours...
Good work
Jordan oxo |
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Re: Dream world
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:44:03 PM AEST
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| that is exactly what I want too, i have a very cynical view of the world and I wish everything could be good as well. a beautiful poem and i couldn't have said it better. |
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Re: Dream world
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by MissMandy on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:28:15 PM AEST
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That's right Mike, you're good, deal with it! ;)
Luv you lots and i told you it was a great poem!
~Mandicimo |
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