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Mom
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:02:30 AM in AEST
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Hey, Mom,
Guess what?
I'm not coming back....
YOU drove me away.
Yeah, I had my own reasons for leaving....
But when I had the chance,
I was gonna come back and do right....
You know how my mind works....
How I sometimes get things mixed up....
Since when is it
MY fault?
MY fault I got the days mixed up?
Come on, can't you think up one better?
How about when you told all those people
I sat around on my butt all day
And never looked for a job?
They knew me better than that....
I was job hunting everyday except weekends....
And when I was still there,
I had 14 applications in....
Try again....
So whose fault is it that I've decided not to come back?
Let me know when you decide you want to see
Your grandkids
When I have them....
Cause it sure ain't mine....
It is my decision, however,
But the fault isn't mine....
So you think about it,
Since this poem is the most you've ever let me talk to you,
Always too busy,
Or whatever other excuse you had
To ignore
YOUR OLDEST SON!!!!!!!!!
I'd tell you whose fault it is,
But I don't want to ruin the surprise
For you....
Copyright ©
Solmyr1404
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2004-08-31 00:02:30]
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Re: Mom
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by veramouse on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 02:17:17 AM AEST
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quite difficult to understand, the poem is fine, but mothers are human, they make mistakes too, i hope yours reads this poem, and, i hope it can open communication
mothers and sons have a special bond.
Vera. |
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Re: Mom
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by Jenn2004 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:09:41 AM AEST
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| I dont blame u one bit for writing this poem. I go through the same thing with my mom. She puts me down and talks negative to me, while she does things for her other kids and not me. I hope things get better between yall. Im here if u need a friend to talk to. |
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Re: Mom
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:10:30 AM AEST
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Mom's sometimes believe that tuff love is what's needed. Being angry won't get the response you're looking for. It will only get you more of the same. You like to write. Then write your mom a personal, open and honest letter. Don't accuse - explain. Tell how you feel and why you feel that way. Maybe your mom is in the wrong ~ Maybe your mom just sees the world differently. Anyway, try again, she's the only mom you've got.
Good luck hon,
J~ |
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Re: Mom
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by jeans on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 01:25:43 AM AEST
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| it's good |
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Re: Mom
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by rhyme_me_to_sleep on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:29:08 AM AEST
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Sometimes they listen, sometimes they don't and sometimes we do too.
Very good write. |
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Re: Mom
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:16:17 PM AEST
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i got the poem very well. i'm truely sorry if this is true, as i always am, i am here to talk if u want to.
well about the poem some more. i got it very well but i could see where other ppl could get kinda confused and not be able to follow it more. i was a good poem and u were right, it's not sad, but it's not happy either. in a way it is, cause u left the problem for u behind.
it was a good poem.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Mom
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by Sinned on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 04:28:45 PM AEST
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Honor
Your father
Your mother
The gift of life
They gave you
You don't even have to like them
Sad angry write
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