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Insomniatic Prayer
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:25:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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dear father above
please shut my eyes
if not forever
then for tonight
shadows walk around me
my mind is going crazy
i want to get up
but my legs are far to lazy
my eyes wide open
my jaw hung loose
my thoughts tied to light
an awakened noose
fear of staying awake
i want to fall asleep
i close my eyes to try
to lose myself deep
holding all my breaths
to hopefully pass out
with my mouth wide open
i let out muted shouts
windows are my eyeballs
open without shades
the beams of moonlight
are tiny little blades
justify my prayer
by putting me to sleep
i pray the lord
my fears to keep
cause if i sleep
before i die
i pray my lord
to shut my eyes
the end is near
i see the light
burning my soul
so very bright
please take me now
away from all of this
endless insanity
incase its contagious
it is here now
the end has come
i must take in the sun
so amen i am done
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Re: Insomniatic Prayer
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by waos on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:46:58 PM AEST
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that was good. really good. the best part was the "cause if i sleep before i die i pray my lord to shut my eyes." that totally rocked. i loved this entire thing!!
~Jekyll/waos
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Re: Insomniatic Prayer
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:24:39 AM AEST
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| i really liked this poem alot. you have a good way with words. |
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Re: Insomniatic Prayer
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by Flipped_out on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:51:38 PM AEST
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Jeremy, jeremy, jeremy...just reading these words makes me want to lay down at your altar. I truly adore you, by this poem alone I would have your love child
so long as you where soley responsible for its financial needs to an excess of £ 45,000 PA
You are one cool mofo
I love you
K x |
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Re: Insomniatic Prayer
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:01:27 PM AEST
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| Great poem can relate very much so... Piece of advice... the last stanza could use a boost...But all in all it was awesome |
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Re: Insomniatic Prayer
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:02:29 PM AEST
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| Great poem can relate very much so... Piece of advice... the last stanza could use a boost...But all in all it was awesome |
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