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My Addiction
Contributed by
CrimsonOrgazm
on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:56:09 PM in AEST
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your words are venom
your pretty little lies
make me believe your words
help me to be alive
feeling dull inside
feeling dull inside
do you know what it means to die?
whisper your words in my ear yet again
make me shudder
make me feel my dear friend
your words are venom
my poison, my end
make me feel
make me feel
make me feel yet again
whisper your words on my lips
down my neck and reach my fingertips
tell me you love me,
your pretty little lies
it's only your truths i truly despise
whisper your words so that i can fly
keep me alive
keep me alive
touch me, kiss me, feel me
im alive,
**** me, love me, tell me
all your lies
your words are venom
but they help me to fly
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2004-08-30 21:56:09]
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Re: My Addiction
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:00:32 AM AEST
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Interesting use of contrast in your rhymes. The discomforture you show in them is refreshingly honest and makes for worthwhile reading.
I like your name, also - its certainly eye-catching, and your poetry (of what I've read so far) lives up to it.
Hoping you're coping with it - keep writing and welcome. |
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Re: My Addiction
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by jaeann on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:20:28 AM AEST
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| it's only your truths i truly despise......this rocks!!!! |
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