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Empty Inside
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:25:49 PM in AEST
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Empty Inside
You can see it in my eyes
I'm empty inside
An endless void of nothingness
Never to be filled to the brim
With any other feeling but this
My soul is the darkest abyss
Reality I cannot see
My feelings I can't keep
They replace themselves
By my negativity
I want so much more
But I fail even before
When I give up and let go
Couldn't hold myself from falling
Into the abyss that I've become
I wanted so much more
But I've fallen too far below
To deserve anything anymore
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Re: Empty Inside
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:29:38 PM AEST
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| Good poem, sounds just like me!!! Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Empty Inside
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:37:38 PM AEST
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Hmmmm have you been reading my mind lately??
Nice write....
Jenni |
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Re: Empty Inside
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by afterdark on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:54:36 PM AEST
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And yet again you have another good write here..Yo never do seem to fail in your poems..I am happy at least you keep writing them..Your a talent more so then most on here..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: Empty Inside
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:57:01 PM AEST
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cew poem i really enjoyed this 1,it kicked some serious *ass man,keep up the great writes,and tell cheech if shes forgetten somethen tell her to kick herself in the *ss and keep up with the days,pease sista J
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Re: Empty Inside
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:22:04 AM AEST
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here here, you must have been reading my thoughts too lol great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Empty Inside
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 01:11:12 PM AEST
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| it's funny how many ppl feel the exact same. it was a good poem because i feel like i could have said the same. you do deserve more tho, no one should feel empty and no one should make anyone else feel empty...maybe i should heed my own words hey? |
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Re: Empty Inside
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 05:35:10 PM AEST
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I have felt the same thing many times. I have to fight it still. Take care of yourself out there.
--Mothy |
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Re: Empty Inside
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:29:00 AM AEST
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beautiful....the flow of a crippled pilgrim captured and transported to sweetly to page.
The Wind.... |
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Re: Empty Inside
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by lanna047 on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 01:08:27 AM AEST
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| I too can add myself to the list of people who can identify with this well written poem. Emotions illustrated so well with your words. I hope things get better. |
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