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Ode to a Killer
Contributed by
Sordida
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Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:21:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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You tell people I’m evil
You’re closer than you think
But was it not you
Who abused me for your kink?
But now you will regret it
And this is what I’ll do
I’ll stab you with a shard of glass
And watch the blood slide through
I’ll tie you to the wooden wall
And watch you while you bleed
I’ll beat you with a leather belt
Like you use to do to me
I’ll take a rusty better knife
Like I always said I would
I’ll castrate you right then and there
Just to prove I could
I know that you’re a pyro
So I’ll burn off all you hair
I’ll listen to your screaming
As I salt your wounds with care
You never understood me
But I bet you wish you had
Tried a little harder
But now that’s just too bad
Copyright ©
Sordida
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2004-08-30 21:21:09]
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Re: Ode to a Killer
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by silverjade on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:26:19 PM AEST
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| haha thats an awesome poem, i love it |
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Re: Ode to a Killer
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:26:46 PM AEST
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| Good write. I have never wrote anything like this before, but it was good, you really got right to the point!!! |
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Re: Ode to a Killer
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by Calista on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:41:07 PM AEST
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wow! i love this poem! i wrote something like this called Why Do I Hate Thee, Let Me Count the Ways, but your poem is remarkable! "As I salt your wounds with care" lol I love it! Great write!
~Calista |
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Re: Ode to a Killer
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by tabby on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:32:10 AM AEST
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| wow im blown away! fantastic poem :o) |
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Re: Ode to a Killer
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by Scarlett on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:39:02 AM AEST
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| that is amazing. well written and catchy. great write. keep it up |
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