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Our final Chapter
Contributed by
kojikeneda
on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 07:08:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A water fall
hasty and random
Flowing with power
Never still
How do you let it rest?
A beautiful millpond
This was our foundation
Now as our year grows fainter
Random and rapid weve become
Once we were innocent
It Began with a night of conversation
But thru the nights on break
We grew
We found comfort in one another
O my, how those days have faded….
Now we are stuck
So many ways weve abused that purity
Neither of us are the same
Nor could we let happen what was so innate
We turned our back on us
With us came three words
jealousy , resentment, lust
A backwards picture painted thru a mirror
We became tangled
Lost in our ways
Never far from our values
But still not with them
Id rather this picture was painted with my blood
A deep sick feeling is what I have
Instead I wish for a sense of comfort
Warmth
This is why I yearned for you as I did
This is why I run from you as I am
Nothing is sacred
Nothing is pure
Another year closes
Another love is lost
Summer peaks over the mountains this morning
This is my way out
Good bye
Waterfall
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2004-08-30 19:08:25]
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Re: Our final Chapter
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by Jolly on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 07:22:48 PM AEST
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Ever flowing, ever changing..yes; how can you stop it.?
Be careful going out through a waterfall..there's always the danger of drowning...the rapids you know. |
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Re: Our final Chapter
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 07:34:12 PM AEST
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| wow i really liked this poem, very deep and dark in a way. i think you did an incredible job. |
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Re: Our final Chapter
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by rhyme_me_to_sleep on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 08:16:35 PM AEST
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jealousy, resentment, lust.......
foundation of yet another one night stand gone bad.....
very good poem. |
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Re: Our final Chapter
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by karoody on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 04:33:45 PM AEST
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i enjoyed this talented write very much....so heartbreakingly tragic....sounds like more than love got lost her....maybe some lovers as well...
thank you
kara
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