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Love Within a Storm
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 05:04:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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the echo of your voice
thunders within my soul
the tears begin pouring
i feel myself grow cold
i tremble with fear
at the eye of this storm
lightning flashes through my eyes
leaving me lost and forlorn
my mind becomes clouded
as twilight encompasses me
i drowning in this emotion
i find myself lost at sea
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Re: Love Within a Storm
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:45:15 PM AEST
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How beautifully tragic. Your descriptive writing is wonderful.
I really like this poem. Sad, but so captivating.
~Breezy |
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Re: Love Within a Storm
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:10:14 PM AEST
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as twilight encompasses me
i love this line so much |
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