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Away
Contributed by
KiLLeR_pHyScO_999
on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:34:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Your Moving Away,
no more long nights.
what can i say?
i cant lose you in this fight.
you cried,i heard you,
i sat there and wondered why.
Now that i've lost you too,
i cannot..NO! i will not say good-bye.
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Re: Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ezekiel on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 06:22:35 PM AEST (User
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The poem has good structure and the economical use of words makes the ones you do use stand out more. It is an interesting thought poem and accessible to the reader.
God's peace to you.
Ezekiel
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