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bits and pieces...
Contributed by
brown_eyez_
on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:21:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Lost--
cold, dark, and longing.
longing for someone
to save me.
Save me--
from my own destruction
and torment.
Caught--
pulled and trapped into
a tangle
of darkness.
Shattered--
broken into a million
pieces smashed
into a jagged surface.
Unknown--
swept into oblivion
where my pieces are
Lost--
lost and forgotten...
Copyright ©
brown_eyez_
... [
2004-08-30 16:21:46]
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Re: bits and pieces...
(User Rating: 1 )
by rhyme_me_to_sleep on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:38:59 PM AEST
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| A very beautiful poem.....yes lost and cold and alone.....looking and longing, wanting and needing....... |
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Re: bits and pieces...
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 03:10:37 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful....... warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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