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Unspoken Heart
Contributed by
Soulless
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Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:15:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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So here I go laying all my cards out
Double check what I've been dealt
Do I have the strength to look inside myself?
Look at all I’m left without
These unspoken things leave me lost
Standing in silence waiting for you
But what am I searching for
Another broken heart untrue
So here I am telling secrets to the raindrops
Let down while they don’t whisper back
But do they listen as they’re falling down
Who can say once they hit the ground?
These unspoken things leave me lost
Standing in silence waiting for you
But what am I searching for
Another broken heart untrue
I fall fast with the raindrops
Can’t catch what’s blown away
Broken into times trap
And I can’t break Away
These unspoken things leave me lost
Standing in silence waiting for you
But what am I searching for
Another broken heart untrue ~
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Re: Unspoken Heart
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by pixie on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:56:19 PM AEST
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a great dark write, you have added beuaty into this write with the raindrops...
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Re: Unspoken Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:57:33 PM AEST
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awww..... sad but beautifully written, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Unspoken Heart
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by clowns_can_burn on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:06:05 AM AEST
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Re: Unspoken Heart
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:21:20 PM AEST
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Do I have the strength to look inside myself?
What a powerful question... I loved this poem
it was writting with breathtaking honesty and it
was achingly beautiful. Wow I don't know what
to say.
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Re: Unspoken Heart
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by hoist1atca on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 12:08:38 AM AEST
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I feel that you are just as good at playing the piano as you are at writing poetry.
Never give up on the things that you love for they are the key to tomorrows happiness.
I am glad you liked my poem.
I write with my feelings not my thoughts.
Thoughts change but feelings remain the same forever.
Joseph D Houk
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