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Pieces Of The Jigsaw
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 02:32:11 PM in AEST
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I am trying to put together my jigsaw,
Finding pieces scattered all over the floor,
The pieces resemble parts if my life,
Broken apart from all the trauma & strife.
There are so many pieces missing,
For answers I am forever fishing,
My past is like a patchwork quilt,
Filled with anger & filled with guilt.
I shoved my past away to a distant land,
Never wanting it to be close at hand,
But it has found it’s way back,
Now it prepares to launch an attack.
There’s so many questions in my head,
Answers lie in the grave with the dead,
Along with my unloving Mother,
In her love her children didn’t smother.
My past life has no clear map,
I don’t have anything apart from a few scraps,
I have lots of questions that end with why?
But people stay silent after they die.
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pixie
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Re: Pieces Of The Jigsaw
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 02:56:31 PM AEST
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Awww a very sad piece...
good write. |
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Re: Pieces Of The Jigsaw
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 03:06:58 PM AEST
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Pixie, once you learn to put it all behind you and only live from today forward it will all come together.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Pieces Of The Jigsaw
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 03:23:29 PM AEST
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Pixie, grab some moss and throw it down before that backward rolling stone. Granted it is important to know who you are and where you came from, but if you spend all your time looking back ... you won't be able to choose what lies ahead. The past has been plotted, navigated, and manuvered through, plan and map ahead. I know it is not that easy, but nothing worth doing usually is.
Hang in there dear, we're all here for you.
Nazmythian ~
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Re: Pieces Of The Jigsaw
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by screwup on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 03:57:18 PM AEST
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I'm going to give the comment above me some credit... we all ARE here for you. We will always have your back, just like you have had ours. Don't ever hesitate to pm or email me- I'm here.
excelent write |
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Re: Pieces Of The Jigsaw
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:14:43 PM AEST
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A sad write very well written. Well done.
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Re: Pieces Of The Jigsaw
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 05:08:39 PM AEST
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Pixie...this is really sad and so very touching.. You know I am always just a click away if you need to talk..ok...
Luv and hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Pieces Of The Jigsaw
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:36:19 PM AEST
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i believe you hit on something in this poem, all of us writers have a patchwork quilt past, else how could we write? i would rather have my past then one all rosey, i would be dull and mundane otherwise:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Pieces Of The Jigsaw
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 01:06:10 AM AEST
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Aaww sweetheart eyes always blurry
time
is the answer
God bless |
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