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CLOUDY
Contributed by
Alina
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Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 01:21:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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smokin last night
and sippin away my fears
becoming an addict again
drowning in blood filled tears
please save me
from the demons under my bed
they come out to play every night
to haunt the sights in my head
finding the needle last night
but the vein was burned black
why do I continue this repitition
blood pouring down my back
please, can you save me
from this hell I so create
I hate this but I continue
until I reach this fate
just drowned in sorrow last night
with the voices from my pipe bowl
I want to win this game
but I already sold my soul
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-08-30 13:21:32]
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Re: CLOUDY
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by theMoth on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 01:34:54 PM AEST
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| I'm becoming more familiar with your work, and it's pretty good. I can't personally relate to this subject, but you relate this without flaw. --Mothy |
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Re: CLOUDY
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by pixie on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 02:13:23 PM AEST
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wow, such a powerful write, this poem is faultless, great flow and expression,
pixie xx |
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Re: CLOUDY
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by darkplaidbabe on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 06:31:46 PM AEST
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you never cease to amaze me girl, beautiful poem. always a pleasure to read.
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Re: CLOUDY
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:24:08 PM AEST
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Such greatness...we always go back to our addictions don't we...it's a habit...one that will always haunt us...
thanks for the comment
summer |
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Re: CLOUDY
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by sammydid on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:30:03 PM AEST
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this is my one of my first times reading your poems... really strong. emotion? hell yeah.
-natalie
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