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The Cold Obsession Of Things That Are Dead
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:09:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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please forgive the sacred life
that was stolen in the night
forget the act which was commited
through the lies you must admit it
wrong was done in the right hand
i have disgraced the title of man
pride was what was believed in
proud enough to commit this sin
systems of guilt and tears are built
founded on cold minds filled
skeletal phantoms haunt the minds
passing through skulls, just cant hide
castles made of bodies imprison youth
forgetting life was without proof
rolling dice to see who lives
the gun is the only thing that gives
murder seems to be the latest game
serial killers gain their fame
embered winters scourch the lives
men are forfeiting their wives
so they survive the growing pain
causing blood to fall in the rain
the hunters choose their prey by praying
and the children die while theyre playing
red is the color of the sea
not from the ocean but dead bodies
puddles of blood fill the sinks of homes
the homeless are the sane while alone
sanity becomes money
those who think, are the only free
when all the earth becomes psychotic
it is the end that is it
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abnormalpunk
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2004-08-30 11:09:37]
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Re: The Cold Obsession Of Things That Are Dead
(User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:22:41 AM AEST
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Hey Jer, glad to see you again
wonderful feelings, great words, but i feel it tends to loose rythm a little towrds the end..
fantastique, j'aime cette poésie
Kelly x |
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Re: The Cold Obsession Of Things That Are Dead
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:42:30 AM AEST
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| Nothing less than astounding. Excellent write! |
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