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Counterfeit Grin
Contributed by
psyche
on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:57:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Many faces guard the path
Leading toward my soul
As time elapses,
Through untold changes
Life will seize its desperate toll
Loneliness and fears take over
Pushing sense beyond my reach
No longer can I bear the heartache
Growing olds’ begun to teach
Gaze upon my face in daylight
Subtle camber/ young skins glow
Inside my heart lie
torn & tattered
Shattered but for new bloods flow
Someone fix me!
Cry I
Outward,
Upward,
Spreading to the sky
It carries to the highest winds
Yet returns a silent, blank reply
Every day revives my seeking
Striving forth to find a cure
And when I catch your gaze upon me
I lie with smiles I wish were pure.
Copyright ©
psyche
... [
2004-08-30 10:57:56]
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Re: Counterfeit Grin
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by hooray_its_jen on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:32:38 PM AEST
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Whoa........you have no idea......I'm......um......that was......you're.......I mean.....wow.
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Re: Counterfeit Grin
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by rubytears on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 10:55:15 AM AEST
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this poem is like my life youv'e no idea how it feels to no sum1 else feels that way......
luvs & kisses
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Re: Counterfeit Grin
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:06:12 PM AEST
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excellent write, very well worded
I especially love the first and third stanzas
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Re: Counterfeit Grin
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by SocialMisfit on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:01:33 AM AEST
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wow......very powerfull and very well worded i agree the third stanza stands out it is magnificant.
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Re: Counterfeit Grin
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:28:04 PM AEST
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| The ending was perfect. I loved that last stanza. Excellent work. |
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Re: Counterfeit Grin
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by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:49:47 AM AEST
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| Very creative emotional poem. Shows strong feelings. Great write! |
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