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torn

Contributed by dantoad on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

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torn
once again i want the best of everything
but i can't have it all
and one day i will be perfect but for now
i am all i have

and it hurts to feel like you aren't there
hurts to think you don't tell the truth
hurts me to hurt you
i need to stop

but it is my addiction
i have a problem with bad habits
i am a mes
i need time for me and time to get myself back to where i wanna be
and we can go from there, ok?
if only it was all that easy

i don't want to hurt you
but i want everythin perfect again
and i can't get over everything
i wish i could be good again, or better
and i need time to get that way and then make it all good

will u let me? be everything i could ever want, what u want?

i can't think straight for you, and i need things for me too
and as much as i want you i know i need me more
i hate the feelings i get when i can't always do the right thing, or what i want
life can get scary sometimes
and i want to hide
but i can't, i have to learn to be me
and i need your help, and i want you to understand
i love you, but i need some time, and i know this sounds really immature.

but this is goodbye for now

Copyright © dantoad ... [ 2002-11-04 14:00:00]
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Re: torn (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 02:47:04 PM AEST
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That was very good. Nice write.

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