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I Gave Myself a Broken Heart

Contributed by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 03:43:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



He took a breathe, I took three
He smiled and fell to one knee
And looking up into my eyes
He asked me for forever; I fed him lies.

I wasnt ready, I was too scared
The love I felt was the love I feared
And I let him walk right out of my life- alone
The pressure too heavy; but no blame was thrown.

We stayed friends for what seemed like a day
Before we had it, he took it away
And now I live in a blackhole
While giving me up; my heart he stole.

So sitting here now, Im feeling despair
Cause now I realize he really did care
The emptiness is consuming me while we're apart
I gave myself this broken heart.

A second chance would be asking too much, so-
I take it in strides, hoping only I know
Life is so different with love by your side
It's better never having to hide.











Copyright © xSlashXPrettyXSkinx ... [ 2004-08-30 03:43:06]
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Re: I Gave Myself a Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:21:38 AM AEST
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very nice and never to late to tell him, do it and good luck


Re: I Gave Myself a Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:50:03 AM AEST
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Why don't you try talking with him, Linds, and explaining your reasons. Why waste a chance when there might still be one? Never take love lightly. Real love doesn't come along that often.

Love,
Rita


Re: I Gave Myself a Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by kojikeneda on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:14:04 AM AEST
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you put this work on a letter and in a card attached to a flower send it to a place where you know he will be. stand and watch him open and read your work/feelings and fight for that which was lost...


Re: I Gave Myself a Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by kojikeneda on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:14:33 AM AEST
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you put this work on a card and in a letter attached to a flower send it to a place where you know he will be. stand and watch him open and read your work/feelings and fight for that which was lost...


Re: I Gave Myself a Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:04:25 AM AEST
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How awful to give yourself a broken heart!
But it's still not too late........go for it. Let him know of your loneliness.......bet he will reciprocate!!!
Good luck
consue




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