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Today
Contributed by
Jenn2004
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Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 02:29:18 AM in AEST
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Today I wake up, I still cant get over you,
Today I wake up and still cant believe its true,
Today I wake up, and wonder what did i do,
Today, I still havent gotten over you,
Today is like all the other days i had,
Today I wake up, still feeling sad,
Today I get out of bed, and you are not there,
the memories of you is still everywhere,
Today there is no laugher, just silence in my life,
Today, my heart feels like it has been stabbed by a knife,
Today i wonder what did i ever see in you,
Today I still dont know what i am going to do,
Today is just another day without you
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Re: Today
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by emystar on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 02:42:01 AM AEST
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Sad but written well.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Today
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 05:22:32 AM AEST
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| i know exactly how u feel, right at this moment im having a heinous breakup with my boyfriend over MSN for chrisakes! agh... the trials and tribulations of a 14 year old |
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Re: Today
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 07:04:30 AM AEST
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| hmmm, what can I say about a masterwork such as this? Nothing, a comment would give too little credit. |
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Re: Today
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:20:15 PM AEST
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| excellent write that conveys a lot of emotion. im considering if today is too redundant in this, but i dont think it is. moving on is as essential as having a past to learn from. |
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