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Now, its all over.........
Contributed by
ravisada
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 11:49:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Don't look so sad my love, now its all over
I never thought that my love will end with grief
When you walked away from me for good
my heart cried for your lost love
Now, where do I carry my feelings at last
The day I was with you for your love
that can not be found any more in my heart
The day I was with you for our honeymoon
those feelings cannot be found in my present life
Don't come back to me my love, now its all over
Stay wherever you get better love showered upon you
I have given you what ever I could
I have walked with you the distance that I could
I have shown you my love as much as I could
but now I am alone and left nothing for me
Don't think of me my love, now its all over
I will walk to the land that no one knows
and be there without hearing your loving words any more
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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2004-08-29 23:49:35]
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Re: Now, its all over.........
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 01:20:57 AM AEST
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Ah what was that?
Your not dying are you??
such emotional write.it brought tears to my eyes. take care. |
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Re: Now, its all over.........
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 05:03:39 AM AEST
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Awww I definitely agree, this is soooo heart-wrenchingly emotional, it too moved me to tears...
Very heartfelt and touching, and I hope that things get better for you... :)
~kit |
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