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Faith Lost
Contributed by
DragonLuvSong
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 10:43:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I used to have faith.
I continued to believe that you loved me.
I continued to believe that you wanted me.
I continued to believe that you wanted to see me.
I continued to believe in you.
But then I didn't see you.
But then I didn't talk to you.
But then I didn't believe.
I lost faith because I lost you.
I lost faith because I feel rejected.
I am rejected.
I am ignored.
I am forgotten.
I am lost.
Do you really love me?
You do a good job of saying it but not of showing it.
You tell me all the time and call me baby.
I tell you that feels good for a while but this feels worse.
It feels worse when I don't see you and you are so close.
It feels worse when I can't talk to you if I call.
It feels worse when I start to think you don't love me.
Today I felt a lot.
In the morning I was confident to hear from you, then see you.
In the afternoon I didn't think I would see you, but I was confident you would call.
In the evening I kept trying to call and felt depressed.
In the night I got angry because I don't hear from you or see you and you don't care.
And it only gets worse when others also ignore me.
So depressed, unloved; I cry because you feel so far when that is untrue.
I feel that its over because you don't want me.
I feel that I want to hate you because you forget me.
I feel that I want to die because I love you and you reject me.
It feels cold; frigid.
It looks dark; inky.
I hear nothing; deafened.
I speak naught; muted.
It is hopeless; the end.
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DragonLuvSong
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2004-08-29 22:43:31]
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Re: Faith Lost
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by katyqueen35 on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 11:51:08 PM AEST
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It sounds to me like you should forget about this person and move on.
your write saids alot about what your going through .good write. |
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Re: Faith Lost
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by alliecat on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:46:47 AM AEST
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| ive been in the shoes your in now.....it only gets worse......but the good thing is that with time, you start to numb yourself towards the bad feelings......love sucks sometimes, in my case all the time.....love your poem....keep writing |
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