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What Went Wrong
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:26:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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what went wrong
with her
that night
they'll say at my feuneral
wispering to each other
about a destructive childhood
but it wasnt that
it never was that
i used to BE a happy child
but not untill a time ago
where i gave up
but only on the inside
tried to conceal
the terrible acheing to die
didnt want anyone to know
about this corrupted mind
that screwed itself too many times
not even be able to logically think
"what went wrong?"
"she allways seemed so happy!"
they will continuisly say
did they not under stand
the statement i left behind
for the message plainly reads
in freshly drawn blood
straight from my chest
for this comes from my heart
this note of departure..
"I Was Never Ok."
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-08-29 20:26:58]
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Re: What Went Wrong
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by screwup on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:30:44 PM AEST
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| I understand where you are coming from...outstanding write. |
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Re: What Went Wrong
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 12:34:24 AM AEST
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| ah i say this is a very good write but please try not to harm yourself and seek help..... |
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Re: What Went Wrong
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:15:44 AM AEST
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Wow... those 4 words just say it all, to me personally. I'm gonna have to remember to use that if I ever kill myself. lol. Thanks for the great read.
~ Moonlit |
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