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Cutting Release
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:48:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I sit alone,
rocking on the floor.
A train.
A train of thought.
Yet so much more.
Running itself into the ground.
Eternally in circles.
Wearing the tracks ragged.
Staring into nothing.
Blankly.
Cut.
A simple want, a need.
Obsession.
The tip of the razor,
light on my skin.
Sink the edge in,
deeper than fear.
Push it deeper,
push the limit.
Drag it slowly,
feeling each layer of skin
seperate from itself.
Drunk off the emotion.
Seeing the flesh
from the inside exposed.
So this is what I look like.
Behind the love,
behind the hate,
behind the mask I've made,
this is me.
A corner of the gash
is starting to seep with crimson.
Slower the crushing hope,
the gouge begins to fill.
I drink the blood
flowing forth so cautiously
in my state of paradise.
Coaxing it to pour like
a mighty river by
engraving more relief into my skin.
I could go on forever,
slash after slash,
living in eternal happiness.
But the thought of people knowing,
seeing and not appreciating
the beauty and detail in my scars
limits me to five.
So I close my eyes,
enjoying the calm,
and fall into a peaceful sleep.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-08-29 19:48:09]
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Re: Cutting Release
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:11:00 PM AEST
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well captured emotion.
you know, I always felt this way, but with fencing and tai chi swrod training, I got cut enough, I never had to do it to myslef. Felt good though, a release, physican pain to match the emotional pain. It truly is an addiction like any other.
Well done. |
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Re: Cutting Release
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by screwup on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:42:09 PM AEST
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| I know what you are going through...as I am sitting here doing the same at this very moment in time. |
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Re: Cutting Release
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by AbnormalPunk on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 09:34:47 PM AEST
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omg... another cutting poem... hey bro or chic... check out my poem "bleeding the tears away".... i used to cut and this is my preaching anti cutting poem... please comment... anyways... your poem was worded greatly and i like the feel of it... but im sorry to say its just "another cutting poem".... take care
jeremy |
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Re: Cutting Release
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 12:27:50 AM AEST
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| I find this poem very disturbing and you need to seek help.And ignore that abnormalpunk person .please do that for yourself and seek help. |
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Re: Cutting Release
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by emphaticplacebo on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 07:53:34 AM AEST
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| I always look forward to reading your stuff and this is no exception..I think you have a real talent for describing the raw emotion and pain you feel. Great write and hope to read more from you soon |
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Re: Cutting Release
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by bite_me on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 03:13:53 AM AEST
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Aaawwww, another rly nicely writtin poem, you capture the emostional so well, i know how you feel as well...hope your ok tho!
Ella
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Re: Cutting Release
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:29:08 AM AEST
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| Vivd write, running with on edge emotions within the very flow of the poem, awsome read, cheers for sharing. |
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