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Thoughts
Contributed by
Aris
on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I watch the mirror,
what I see, an empty face, an empty dream.
I dont know why, or perhaps I do,
The reason is, that I am not with you.
I want to love,
I want to hold you,
feel your love, and never let you.
Bring the joy to my life,
let yourself free,
never ask why.
Perhaps I know, perhaps I dont
why a tear is in my thoughts,
I never cry, you know that,
but without you, I give up.
There's no other, its just you.
Knowbody else will ever love you the way I do!
Copyright ©
Aris
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2002-11-04 11:00:00]
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Re: Thoughts
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by OreO on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 11:21:38 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this
Your love flows through your
words here, Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Thoughts
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by Aris on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 11:57:52 PM AEST
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| Thankyou so much for your kind words. |
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Re: Thoughts
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by Chrissylee on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 05:02:59 AM AEST
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when you love from your heart with all your strength you know the one you love could never be loved by another with the special love you have for them...great write.
peace love and happy poetry |
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Re: Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 09:39:55 PM AEST
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I liked your poem. The person you wrote it for must be special. Do you think she is the one and only for you?
I feel the same.
Keep writing! |
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Re: Thoughts
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by Ruby1987 on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 07:38:30 PM AEST
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| Hi i'm new i loved your poem please write more |
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