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Morbid Promises Of Souls No More
Contributed by
AbnormalPunk
on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the darkness of the inner soul
has over run the golden sun
the war of the earth ending
has long since begun
gimmicks of light and truth
are showing us the wrong
the weak are coming out
and defeating the strong
final thoughts of life and death
pass through their thickened heads
never knowing whats become
of all the unborn dead
with battle axes and sabers
fighting off their own kind
they look behind their broken skulls
they notcie whats been left behind
choosing to fight than to live
the move on without the fallen
many years have passed
and now the souls are rotten
living inside bodies so numb
controling the ideas in their minds
people kill themselves right now
'cause the unknown power they cant find
zombies humans have become
to all the little problems
they used to share their words polite
now they sing battle anthyms
falling away from the past they know
their future starts to fall away
they press on in the darkness
and still do this very day
these beasts are called humans
they ravage all the earth
never caring about life
and its minimal worth
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AbnormalPunk
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Re: Morbid Promises Of Souls No More
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by kyletycz on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:53:44 PM AEST
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Nice poem, i liked it alot, keep up the good work
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Re: Morbid Promises Of Souls No More
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 04:01:20 PM AEST
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| Punk...I love you! |
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Re: Morbid Promises Of Souls No More
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:20:50 PM AEST
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| this is great, nice use of words, creates a great dark atmomsphere. |
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Re: Morbid Promises Of Souls No More
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by katyqueen35 on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 10:53:54 PM AEST
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An excellent piece of work.
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