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Mommy Daddy My Ghostly Request
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Mother dearest hold him close
Protect him from this world of cruel cruel hate
Guide him so he wont have a failure's fate
Help him be what he always wanted to be
Father dearest come teach him please
Teach him to take charge, be realiable, responisible
Teach him to take risks the, childhood gamble
The gamble to ask a girl if she likes him or not
Mother Dearest please stop hurting him
I guess you beating him is his life's fee
He hasnt hurt you for he's just so young
A baby knowing, only of this pain
Father dearest where have you been
No one has seen you, you with another womin I can see
Neglect your son and beat your wife
I guess thats why she dominates your babies life
I feel sorry for him he follows my path
Hopfully strong enough to keep his life
As I watch this helpless baby Ill be by his side
For gone down the same path now a ghost to watch his side
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heartfilledblood
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2004-08-29 15:19:51]
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Re: Mommy Daddy My Ghostly Request
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 07:10:17 PM AEST
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This was very good..Sad but very good..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: Mommy Daddy My Ghostly Request
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by longforgottenlove on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:14:03 PM AEST
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daric that poem was wonderfully written it almost made me cry and thats not easy
much love,
april rose |
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