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Weeping Rose
Contributed by
kittenfantastico
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 02:51:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Weeping Rose
Weeping rose
Why do you cry
As pale blue blue petals from you do glide
Weeping rose why are you you blue
What is it someone's done to you
Like flowing tears your petals fall
As you hide within your thorny wall
Weeping rose crying in the rain
Someday you'll be reborn and bloom again
So, weeping rose shed not your tears
Loved ones are here to console your fears
Weeping rose please do not cry
The tears you shed are both your's and mine
Weeping rose please weep no more
For there's nothing for you to be sorry for
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Re: Weeping Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:01:51 PM AEST (User
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Aw, I really liked this poem :) It flowed really well. And I liked the idea of it. |
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Re: Weeping Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 01:28:05 AM AEST (User
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There's something nice about this poem.
I think it speaks of fragility and strength, at the same time. That's what I liked about it.
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