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Making Love
Contributed by
Stew
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:52:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When two become one,
The passion, like lightning, over take us.
We feel the thunder in our hearts
As they beat faster and faster.
We hear the whispers
From one heart to the other,
As they become the wind,
Wind that takes our breath away.
We feel the hear, like fire, surround us.
The sweet smell of sweat cover us
Like rain falling from the sky.
We have a feeling of happiness and warmth
The whole way through our bodies,
Then we wrapped our arms around eachother,
And silently fell asleep.
Copyright ©
Stew
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2004-08-29 12:52:09]
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Re: Making Love
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by pixie on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:55:02 PM AEST
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ahhhhh *sighs* this is just beautiful and a feeling well known to ,me,
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Re: Making Love
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 04:32:30 PM AEST
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Nicely written...although its been a eon since I have felt anything remotely loving towards a male lol
Just made me remember that maybe I just possibly could be missing out....
lovely xx
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Re: Making Love
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 04:39:33 PM AEST
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This is really lovely and so true..
Thanks for sharing...
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