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the clouds
Contributed by
Goth
on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 11:12:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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the clouds pass by
with softness
of the sky
the white covers up the sky
like an angel passing
by
they don't seem to
make
a
sound
but if the world was as
small as I,
then the clouds would no doubt
sigh
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Goth
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2004-08-29 11:12:42]
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Re: the clouds
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 11:32:12 AM AEST
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very pretty, good idea to keep it a small poem, inkeeping with how small the world makes us feel
soooooooooooooo V. pretty *sighs*
Kelly x |
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Re: the clouds
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by Lee on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:14:47 AM AEST
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Very crisp.
Like a good bowl of cereal.
You're talent is unfaltering.
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