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you are not my answer
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:59:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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the look in her eye says she adores me
but hher actions never speak the same
the words that she speaks are so loving
but to me they are nothing but blank
this time its to late to picl up the peices
this adoration for you has been burned
today i know the answeres
to why i was ignored
today i know i should have listened iand now i have learned
trust is a dirty word that comes from such a liar
i can't even trust myself
so why was it you i admired
beauty i guess takes over all
walking lines of fire for you
gave me scars on my feet
becoming a liar for you
eventually made me admit defeat
so today is the day i have finally learned
that you are not my answere and me you dont deserve
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Re: you are not my answer
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 04:31:45 AM AEST
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Hey Grip...I like your words here, from the hip?
may I suggest you use a spell check...I don't mean to be rude, just breaks the read up a little (i read poems aloud)
Loved this..fantastic
Kelly x |
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Re: you are not my answer
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 04:56:58 AM AEST
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it's a vert srong and emotional poem.
you've expressed your pain immensly.
i hope writing has helped you to feel better.
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Re: you are not my answer
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by jonbalser on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 10:55:11 AM AEST
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| i know how your feeling, i have been there many times before, and for my writing about it helps me deal with it a lil better |
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