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Dark Horse
Contributed by
positivelypurple
on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:01:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Beautiful Dark Horse
ran away through fields of green
with envy I lie awake
entranced by his mysterious spell
it out in black and white
desert plains he galloped over
my heart and bucked my soul
into the ground thunders
as he pummels through
Unstoppable
Stallion - Sullen and Strong
forces inconceivable
with me he does not belong.
A stirring soul
breathless sigh
He never said goodbye.
My dear stallion
I loved you so hurt
am I angry
hurricane of emotions
torrid lightening blasts
divide the sky
black as his coat
shines like his eyes so bright
illuminating the night
falls upon my lonely home
I wish he would be
safe in the comfort of me.
Oh to hold him tight
grasping his mane with all of my might
A love I could have known
A wistful dream
awaken to a world cruel
without him here
He is gone forever I fear.
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Re: Dark Horse
(User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 02:57:38 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. One of my favourites :) I like the line 'I loved you so hurt' Yay for this poem. It cheered me up today. |
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Re: Dark Horse
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by afterdark on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 01:51:27 PM AEST
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Interesting here..Some was a bit vauge in ways but that is about your life so I can see why..It was good all the same..And you wrote it well..
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