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crimson end
Contributed by
Dizza_13
on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:53:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In this void that is life,
I can only turn to the knife,
I start by carving out my arms,
I watch as blood spews out my wounds,
Gushing over my body igniting my senses,
Then I thrust the blade into my leg,
Slashing through muscle and flesh,
A rush of pleasure pulsates through my veins,
Shoving my hand into the gash,
I tear out my tendons,
Snapping and stretching them to pure agony,
Then slashing away at my chest,
Hacking through the skin then sawing away the bone,
Taking the knife and then thrusting it into my neck,
Twisting it as my throat fills with crimson,
Gurgling and gasping my body turns lifeless,
Finally at peace.
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Dizza_13
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2004-08-29 00:53:04]
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Re: crimson end
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:13:05 AM AEST
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Gory and vivid, Such imagary let loose, awesome write Dizza, it caught my eye, chained my imagination, and inprison my mind within each word.
Excellent poem keep em coming.
Take Care always
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Re: crimson end
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by corrupted_minds on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:18:42 AM AEST
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Beautiful write Dylan, It really made me think. Hopefully we will catch up soon.
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Re: crimson end
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:04:34 PM AEST
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