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lost
Contributed by
Dizza_13
on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:51:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Please don’t be too long,
While you’re gone,
You’re the only thing left in my life,
That gives me joy and keeps me from the knife.
Broken and forsaken,
I’m lost without you.
When you left I was lost without a trace,
Now the only thing on my mind is your pretty face,
Just the thought of you makes my heart race,
So cold inside I long for your embrace.
Broken and forsaken,
I’m lost without you.
Copyright ©
Dizza_13
... [
2004-08-29 00:51:56]
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Re: lost
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by espeeayzee on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:10:55 AM AEST
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| Im no poet, I just write poetry. So Im not here for critique......so whatever it is you say, more power to ya |
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Re: lost
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 02:24:53 AM AEST
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| Awesome, i love it, reminds me of my ex. |
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Re: lost
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 02:49:51 AM AEST
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very emotional Dizza, Im glad you have got someone to hold on to.
Take Care always
Kindragon |
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Re: lost
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:06:22 PM AEST
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| Pretty emotional and good. Great poem. I am sorry that happened to you. |
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