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sneakers
Contributed by
Miss_erika
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:51:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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One day while walking
down mullberry street
I decided to take off my shoes
and walk in bare feet.
The sun made the street
so very hot
that my feet started melting
and I wish they had not.
I quickly put my shoes back on
just before my toes were gone.
When I got home
I discovered bad news
when my toes dried up
they got stuck to the inside of my shoes.
I pulled and i tugged
I even tried cutting them off with a knife,
but it looks like im stuck wearing sneakers
for the rest of my life.
Copyright ©
Miss_erika
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2004-08-29 00:51:34]
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Re: sneakers
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:17:55 AM AEST
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Very good.
U gave it a dramtic flare.
Keep writing.
luv, huggs, barefeet,
emy
I don't like shoes either,
even if it's a sneeker. |
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Re: sneakers
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by MomentInTime on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 06:02:29 AM AEST
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Thanx for the chuckle :o)
Jordan oxo |
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Re: sneakers
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 03:25:11 PM AEST
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| this was a very funny and imaginative poem. good work. |
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