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the girl i love
Contributed by
Dizza_13
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:50:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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See the girl with the broken smile,
The one that each boy she loved defiled,
See the girl with the corrupted mind,
The one that now to love is blind,
See the girl with the shattered heart,
The one that was torn apart.
A girl left in a daze,
Lost and forlorn in crimson haze,
A torn and broken mind,
Is all that’s left to find,
A girl left out to sea,
A girl that will never be free.
A girl with scars so deep,
A girl with tainted memories to keep,
A girl that I love.
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Dizza_13
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2004-08-29 00:50:45]
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Re: the girl i love
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by positivelypurple on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:54:32 AM AEST
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| This is very sweet and nicely written |
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Re: the girl i love
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:15:41 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, very emotional, as all your writes are.
Awesome one.
Take Care always
Kindragon |
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Re: the girl i love
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by darkplaidbabe on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 09:52:35 PM AEST
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its so rare that someone can see the real, injured person underneath the mask. sometimes thats all you have to do to help them, beautiful write.
~Brynna~ |
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Re: the girl i love
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:10:04 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. |
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