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Sadness
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 11:32:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sadness
I am filled with sadness
Inside of me there's nothing but this
I just feel everything's pointless
That there's no reason to live
Reality's been fake all this time
I was denying what wasn't there
It's my fault that I cared
About my now gone purpose
Now I'm left with nothing
But this sadness
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Re: Sadness
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 11:58:18 PM AEST (User
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Search with in and learn to like yourself.
There are plenty reasons to live but I live 2 write and write to live.
Don't know what's got cha down but cheer up, please?
luv, huggs, smiles, happy faces,
emy |
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Re: Sadness
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:11:08 AM AEST (User
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...even in your sadness, you have written a truely beautiful poem, i do hope you feel better soon, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Sadness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:13:51 AM AEST (User
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you've projected your feelings into words very well here. Excellent.
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Re: Sadness
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:52:05 PM AEST (User
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By this poem I feel you have much mre to say..What always did bother me with people like Sylvia Plath with tha talent she had,,greatness beyond great to..She threw it all away...This was a good write as is your others..Make sure I get to read more..I mean that...
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Re: Sadness
(User Rating: 1 ) by subchild on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:58:47 PM AEST (User
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Very well done..Very sad though..
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Re: Sadness
(User Rating: 1 ) by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 09:11:51 PM AEST (User
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extremely sweet kick *ss poem,keep up the great work.later!
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